🍹Early to RISA 🧉@sh.itjust.worksM to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 28 days agoAnon tries to keep his hands busysh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square48fedilinkarrow-up1409arrow-down136
arrow-up1373arrow-down1imageAnon tries to keep his hands busysh.itjust.works🍹Early to RISA 🧉@sh.itjust.worksM to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 28 days agomessage-square48fedilink
minus-squarefrightful_hobgoblin@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up66arrow-down4·28 days agoStory didn’t go anywhere
minus-squarefibojoly@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up95·28 days agoWell yeah, it’s a slice of life, not the Hero’s Journey.
minus-squareBob@feddit.nllinkfedilinkarrow-up64arrow-down2·28 days agoThis motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…
minus-squaremanuallybreathing@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·27 days agoIts totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
minus-squareKusimulkku@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up1·27 days agoCould’ve made it more interesting though
minus-squareLemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·27 days agoYeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
minus-squareKusimulkku@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up2·27 days agoIdk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting
minus-squareInstigate@aussie.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up38arrow-down2·28 days agoOne of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.
minus-squarefestnt@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up21arrow-down2·28 days agoyeah, stories dont walk, duh
Story didn’t go anywhere
Well yeah, it’s a slice of life, not the Hero’s Journey.
This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…
Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
Long John silvers gold?
Could’ve made it more interesting though
Yeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
Idk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting
One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.
yeah, stories dont walk, duh